LO: I can edit and improve my writing
Warm up: Conjunctions with main clauses (co-ordinating conjunctions)
Conjunctions are words or phrases that join two parts of a sentence.
Co-ordinating conjunctions are conjunctions which can join together two main clauses.
You can remember them as the FANBOYS
For And Nor But Or Yet So
Write three sentences which contain a co-ordinating conjunction.
Heidi doesn’t like sausages, nor does she like peas.
Today your task is to choose one or two sections of your story to edit and improve.
Conjunctions (joining words)
Adverbs (gradually, happily)
Time conjunctions (Before lockdown, we could play in the park)
Fronted adverbials (Gradually, I began to feel much happier)
Neatly copy out the edited version and send it to me to display on the wall at school.
I have included my finished story for you to read.