L.O I can edit and improve my writing.
Watch the video from Oak academy on how to edit our work. When Ms Webster talks about editing your climax writing, please edit your adventure story from yesterday. Focus on editing one section of the story, possibly the beginning to make sure you have all of the descriptive language to really give your reader an image of the setting and your characters.
Remember to use a different colour pen (don’t worry if you don’t have green) to show your editing. Don’t spend more than 20 mins editing your own work.